Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Air pollution



        Pollution is aserious problem, that threat our life on the Earth. We can find alot kinds of pollution that effects our life badly like: air, water, hearing, soil,......etc. The change of the natural component of air, water, and other things in our life leads to cause this pollution. The more the proportion of the air pollution arise, the more the diseases spread in egypt. Air pollution means the change of the component of air by opposing to chemicals,particulate matter,or biological materials that cause harm or discomfort to humans or other living or damage the natural environment into atomsphere. We find this pollution surrounding us in every moment even we breathe this polluted air and there are alot of factors which responsible for this pollution.
        According to sources of air pollution ,it refers to the various location ,activities ,or factors which are responsible for the releasing of pollutants in the atomsphere. On one side  haman sources(activities), this kind related to burningdifferent kinds of fuel. i:(Stationary sources)include manufacturing facilities and waste incinerator ,as well as furances and other types of  fuel _burning heating devices . ii:(Mobile sources) include motor vehicle ,air craft and the effect of sounds. iii: Military works. iv:Chemical ,dust and controlledburn practices in agriculture ,and forest management. On another side the environment also contibute in this pollution by its natural factors like. i: Smoke and carbonmonoxide from wildfires. ii:Volacanic activity ,which produce sulfur ,chlorine and ash particulates. iii: Dust from natural sources, usually large areas of land with little or no vegetion. The increase of air pollution leads to arise of heat tempratuer and Stratosheric Ozone depletion. also it leads to make 2.4 million people die each year from cause directly to air pollution. Also it effects on cystic fibrosis, a study from 1999 to 2000 by the Univesity of Washington showed that patients near and around particulate matter air pollution had an increased risk of pulmonary exacerbations and decrease in lung function. With the increase of spreading this disease as areaction of air pollution, chlidern infected by this disease. Also the birth rate become low. This pollution also emerge more in poor countries that lacks wareness and education.
       There are various air pollution control technologies and land use planning strategies available to reduce air pollution. The following items are commonly used as pollution control devices by industry or transportation devices. They can either destroy contaminants or remove them from an exhaust stream before it is emitted into the atmosphere. We should make control using of particulate ,scrubbers ,mercury ,dioxin and furan. Also the government has an effictive role to help in decrease this pollution by putting alot of rules that helps in this pollution ,and put harm punish to whom be dissient.
       At the end ,we notice the danger of this problem and we should cooperate together to face this problem. As this problem threaten our life on the earth and other kinds of creatures. Also we should think that our God give us nature to use it in the correct way ,not to harm its creatures and change its component. We should keep our health because it amarvelous bless ,that nothing can compensate us for it.    

     
    

6 comments:

  1. An excellent draft:
    1. I liked the picture you used.
    2. The content is sufficient.
    3. The introduction is interesting
    BUT
    1. Some words are misspelled, try to make spelling check on the words.
    2. some vocabulary are difficult for common raeders to understand, so I want you to use clearer and more understandable vocabulary in your comming draft.

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  2. hi sara, i like your easy . there are some words that are misspelled. But good girl

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  3. A good essay, but I think it is borrowed from the internet. If you want to use the internet, you can read essays about the topic, but when you want to write your own essay, use your own words. So, iam looking forward to see your own essay not a copy of an internet essay. O.K.
    Actually, I didnt find any mistakes to correct and I think by doing so we will lose the main objective of the course that is improving the writing performance and critical reading of you.

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  4. ok I know some expression from the internet but I trying to make it more scientific ,I will search for this topic in adifferent sources ,and write my point of view

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  5. hi sara . your essay is excellent . The essay has a specific and clear purpose . The essay has a clear and concise main idea. The essay has a clear introduction , a body and a definite conclusion, but some words are difficult to understand .. very good sara keep working .

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