My dream job(first draft)

     Teaching is my dream job. We know that education is the basic element in our life, that doctors, engineers, accountants, and teachers themselves are received education at the beginning of their life. Education is the first stage that when a country want to make development, it should began to improve education system at the first. I think teaching is the message that our God gives it to us. We should be honest and make this message arrive it to its owners.

     Teachers are like prophets. That they will ask about what they do and how they arrive the message in front of god at the judgment day. To day education is an instrument to earn money. Those teachers want to give a big number of private lessons. There a little number of teachers that they care about educate children something in life. These teachers behave like prophets and want to make the message arrive. I want to be one of those teachers. I want to make a child aware of what happened to them, and around them. Making doctors and engineers that they aware of their duties and rights towards society. Doing my best to make the message arrived.

     As we saw the importance of teaching message and the honest those teachers have. I want to make a student have real education better than ours. But I'm afraid that when I become real teacher and face the real world accept the situation as it is. Because I don't have the ability to change any thing.  

My dream job (out line)

Introduction paragraph:

     i. Importance of education
    ii. How teachers are important to make progress in country.
    iii. Why I think teaching is the very important jod(my dream job)

Body paragraph:

     i.What I think about teaching?
    ii.How education in Egypt today?
   iii.What I want to do when I become ateacher?

Conclusion paragraph.

Comparing and contrastive learning (final draft)

       Education is important to achieve success, and reflect the culture of country. Every nation wants to achieve success and development should educate its children. Then it will harvest the result of its education by showing development to the entire world. That other countries look at system of education in the nation, and they will know how this nation achieves success and the level of development in this time. Education like any other things in life changes over the time. May be it seek to development, and better than the previous, also it have its disadvantage inside it.

       In the past, education was a symbol of social arising, enlightenment people, and achieves higher position in thinking and believing things. Because of the few number of educated people, their were a great appreciation to those who educated in the past. The most common way of education in the past was         . It seeks to educate children by making them memorize Holy Koran, and prophet says, know faith proprieties, and know the rules for their life. Also they educate about science and what have scientists been reach to in the science at this time. Boys had their own seminar symposium, and girls had their own also. Boys and girls were separate from each other. Over the time, in the occupation education had a bit changes. Schools have been appeared by its two types: foreign and governmental. Boys in this time had permission to go to school. Not all girls were had this permission. Because of in this time their parent was considered that educate girls is a big shame. Also education wasn't free, and it was available to the rich only. There was no technology, no advanced ways in education.

       Now a day, a lot of people have been educated, and only about 5% haven't educated. Education is free to all of people. Every one should educate to achieve goals of country. Technology has a big role, it make easy for students to know any thing in any time, and make the educational process easier than before. But because of the revolution information now educational system means to put a lot number of subjects in to the student's mind even he understand or not. And as a result of this fault, we find that a lot of children graduate with high level of education without knowing a useful education. Educational system also don't lead to analyzing things in thinking just memorize and recite.

       So, we will find every education system have its own advantages and achieve development, also having disadvantage inside it. But the thing that never been changing over time is the main goal of education to achieve development, and success in country. It also reflects the culture of this country.

Comparing and Contrasting the education in your country now and in the past (first draft)

       Education is important to achieve success, and reflect the culture of country. Every nation wants to achieve success and development should educate its children. Then it will harvest the result of its education by showing development to the entire world. That other countries look at system of education in the nation, and they will know how this nation achieves success and the level of development in this time. Education like any other things in life changes over the time. May be it seek to development, and better than the previous, also it have its disadvantage inside it.

       In the past, education was a symbol of social arising, enlightenment people, and achieves higher position in thinking and believing things. Because of the few number of educated people, their were a great appreciation to those who educated in the past. The most common way of education in the past was learning in circles in mosques. It seeks to educate children by making them memorize Holy Koran, and prophet says, know faith proprieties, and know the rules for their life. Also they educate about science and what have scientists been reach to in the science at this time. Boys had their own seminar symposium, and girls had their own also. Boys and girls were separate from each other. Over the time, in the occupation education had a bit changes. Schools have been appeared by its two types: foreign and governmental. Boys in this time had permission to go to school. Not all girls were had this permission. Because of in this time their parent was considered that educate girls is a big shame. Also education wasn't free, and it was available to the rich only. There was no technology, no advanced ways in education.

       Now a day, a lot of people have been educated, and only about 5% haven't educated. Education is free to all of people. Every one should educate to achieve goals of country. Technology has a big role, it make easy for students to know any thing in any time, and make the educational process easier than before. But because of the revolution information now educational system means to put a lot number of subjects in to the student's mind even he understand or not. And as a result of this fault, we find that a lot of children graduate with high level of education without knowing a useful education. Educational system also don't lead to analyzing things in thinking just memorize and recite.

       So, we will find every education system have its own advantages and achieve development, also having disadvantage inside it. But the thing that never been changing over time is the main goal of education to achieve development, and success in country. It also reflects the culture of this country.

Comparing and contrasting education in your country now and in the past(out line)

Introduction paragraph:
      i. General glance about education.
      ii. How education is important to our life and country?
      iii. How educational system is effect on it's country?


Education in past:
      i. What was education represent in this time?
      ii. The way of teaching in the past.
      iii. What is advantage and disadvantage of this sysytem.


Educational system now:
        i. What is education represent now?
        ii. The used method in education.
       iii. How education effect on our country now?
       iv. Advantage and disadvantages.


Conclusion paragraph.

Art is legitimate or sin(SECOND DRAFT)

       Art is one of the talent, that only human have this proficiency. Art also is expressing the negative energy inside us. We born with this kind of skill being innate in us, and God gives it to us as our brain. After we are born with this skill, we have the choice to use it in good or evil. Also we don't know how people will receive this kind of art. We find that art has two effects on our life good and bad. We find also people are divided into groups: some against art and the other are support it.

       People who are against art think that it leads people to depart from their thoughts or adopt bad ideas. We find the number of films, plays and songs that broadcasting today in space channel and how it they help in diffusing corruption and bad ideas in our society. In addition to that it they make youth violent, and have all kind of this violence. Besides, it has bad effect on teenager, it changes their minds and thoughts and it may lead them to destruct their life and future.

       But who being advocated art think that it is the best thing in their world, and no one can live without it. It diffuses all kinds of virtues, and educates people about their life. Also the advocated people think artist's work useful to people, and help them in their life and knowing about the outer world. Also they think they discuss a lot of issues that helps youth in their life, and take their attention about the thoughts that surround them.  People who support art think that they do a favor for their society, and art is the best thing to develop our youth thoughts.

       At the end, I want every artist to ask himself a question: that if what he does is useful for people or it causes harmful to them? To day, I think art is the negative energy inside negative people (bad people who want to destroy our society) who want to diffuse bad ideas between people in our world. And if every artist asked himself this previous question before doing any work, he won't do any bad work (if he had a good mind). And if we don't know that art is legitimate or sin? Look at the bad thoughts, and how it cause harm to people, then you will know it is ABIG SIN.

ART IS LEGITIMATE OR SIN(first draft)

       Art is one of the talent, that only human have this proficiency. Art also is expressing the negative energy inside us. We born have this kind of skill being innate in us, and God giving it to us as our brain. After we born with this skill, we have the choice to use it in good or evil. Also we don't know how people will receive this kind of art. We find that art have two effects on our life good and bad. We find also people divided into groups: some against art and the other are support it.

       People who against art think that it lead people to depart from their thoughts or adopt bad ideas. We find the number of films, plays and songs that broadcasting today in space channel and how it helps in diffuse corruption and bad idea in our society. In addition to that it makes youth violent, and has all kind of this violent. Beside all of this danger it has bad effect on teenager, it changes their minds and thoughts and it may lead them to destruct their life and future.

       But who being advocated art think that it is the best thing in their world, and no one can live without it. It diffuses all kinds of virtues, and educates people about their life. Also they think their work being useful to people, and help them in their life and knowing about the outer world. Also they think they discuss a lot of issues that helps youth in their life, and take their attention about the thoughts that surrounding them.  People who support art think that they do a favor for their society, and art is the best thing to develop our youth thoughts.

       At the end, I want every artist to ask himself a question: that if what he does is useful for people or it cause harmful to them?.  I think art is the negative energy of negative people whom want to diffuse bad ideas between people in our world. And if every artist asked himself this previous question before doing any work, he won't do any bad work (if he had a good mind). And if we don't know that art is legitimate or sin? Look at the bad thoughts, and how it causing harmful to people, then you will know it is ABIG SIN.

Art is legitimate or sin(out line)

Introduction paragraph:
     i. What is art?
     ii. How it find to day?
     iii. The idea about is it legitimate or sin.

supporting paragraph:
     i. Opinion of whom supporting art.
     ii. Evidences.
     iii.The effect of this opinion on our youth, and its dangerous.

Disagreeing paragraph:
     i. Opinion of whom against it.
     ii.Evidences.

Conclusion paragraph:
     i. My opinion about it.
     ii. How we can do to treat with it?

Air pollution (final draft)

      

       Pollution is a serious problem that threats our life on Earth. We can find many kinds of pollution that affects our life badly like: air, water, hearing, soil ...etc. The change of the natural component of air, water, and other things in our life leads to this pollution. The more the proportion of the air pollution arises, the more the diseases spread in Egypt. Air pollution means the change of the component of air by opposing to chemicals, particulate matter, or biological materials that cause harm or discomfort to humans or other living or damage the natural environment into atmosphere. We find this pollution surrounds us in every moment even we breathe this polluted air. And there are a lot of factors which are responsible for this pollution.
       Air pollution is coming from our interaction with environment. Our scientists made a lot of invention that make our life easier like cars, air conditions and refrigerator, in the same time this invention contribute in causing  pollution. All of this things cause change in the components of the air that surrounds us in our life and environment. The new invention we use also like cars, planes and other vehicles release toxic gases that threaten our life on the earth. For example, Carbon Dioxide that is very dangerous to breathe and it causes death. And there are other gases cause arise the temperature of the earth. But in the case of air condition and refrigerator, it releases Methane (it's a kind of gas) that effects on Earth's Ozone layer. This things we can't find any thing to compensate us from using it, and we can't stop using it. Also we find the manufactured industries that release smoke and other gases and contribute in causing air pollution. All of these kinds are from our interaction, and there are natural causes of air pollution. The natural causes that without human entering like volcanic activity, which produces flames, and ash particulates that scatter on the earth. Dust from natural sources, and natural radioactivity are also causes of this air pollution. All of these causes lead to dangerous diseases and global warming. The rising of producing of these gases on the earth leads to depletion of ozone layer that causes to increase the heating on the earth. Also a lot of heart diseases and lung cancer are from this pollution, and children are most suffering from this pollution.
     As we know the great dangers that pollution makes to us, we should find solutions to decrease its danger. The government should have an effective role to help decrease this pollution by putting harm punishes to whom be dissident who contribute in causing this pollution. We should also try to find some gases to use instead of methane. In addition to that, we should build industries zone out of cities, and decrease traffic jam by constructing anew roads. The government should put punishment for industries that don't use filters in its funnel.
       At the end, we notice the danger of this problem and we should cooperate together to face this problem. And no thing will be useful for us without raising our awareness. This problem threatens our life, and also the other creatures. Also, we should think that our God gives us nature to use it a correct way, not to harm its creatures and change its component. We should keep our health because it is a marvelous bless, that nothing can compensate us for it.

Air pollution (second draft)

      
        Pollution is aserious problem, that threat our life on the Earth. We can find alot kinds of pollution that effects our life badly like: air, water, hearing, soil,......etc. The change of the natural component of air, water, and other things in our life leads to cause this pollution. The more the proportion of the air pollution arise, the more the diseases spread in egypt. Air pollution means the change of the component of air by opposing to chemicals, particulate matter, or biological materials that cause harm or discomfort to humans or other living or damage the natural environment into atomsphere. We find this pollution surrounding us in every moment even we breathe this polluted air and there are alot of factors which responsible for this pollution.
       Air pollution is coming from our interactive with environment. As we know when we make development to make life easier ,we make new inventions ,and as we make new experiment that causes explosion in the air. All of this things cause change in the component of the air that around us in our life and environment. The new invention we use also like cars , planes and other vehicles release toxic gases that threaten our life on the earth ,for example Carbon Dioxide that is very dangerous to breathe it and it cause death. And there are other gases with the association with component of air cause arise the temprature of the earth. But in the case of air condition and refrigetor, it release Mathane that effeects on Earth's Ozone layer. This things we can't find any thing to compensate us from using it ,and we can't stop using it. Also we find the manufactured industries that release smoke and other gases and contribute in causing air pollution. All of this kinds is from our interaction ,and there are natural causes of air pollution. The natural causes that without human entering like volcanic activity ,which produce flames ,and ash particulates that scatter on the earth. dust from natural sources ,and natural radioactivity are also causes of this air pollution. All of this causes lead to  dangerous diseases and global warmming. The arise of producing of these gases on the earth leads to depletion of ozone layer that cause to increase the heating on the earth. Also alot of heart diseases and lung cancer is from this pollution, and childern are most suffering from this pollution.
     As we know the great danger that pollution make to us ,we should find solution to decrease from its danger. The government should has an effictive role to help in decrease this pollution by putting alot of rules that helps in decrease this pollution ,and put harm punish to whom be dissident. we should also try to find some gases to use instead of mathane. In addition to that ,we should build industries zone out of cities ,and  decrease traffic jam by constructing  anew  roads. The government should put apunishment for industries that don't use filters in its funnel.
       At the end ,we notice the danger of this problem and we should cooperate together to face this problem. And no thing will be useful for us without arise of our awareness. As this problem threaten our life on the earth and other kinds of creatures. Also we should think that our God give us nature to use it in the correct way ,not to harm its creatures and change its component. We should keep our health because it amarvelous bless ,that nothing can compensate us for it.
      

Air pollution

        Pollution is aserious problem, that threat our life on the Earth. We can find alot kinds of pollution that effects our life badly like: air, water, hearing, soil,......etc. The change of the natural component of air, water, and other things in our life leads to cause this pollution. The more the proportion of the air pollution arise, the more the diseases spread in egypt. Air pollution means the change of the component of air by opposing to chemicals,particulate matter,or biological materials that cause harm or discomfort to humans or other living or damage the natural environment into atomsphere. We find this pollution surrounding us in every moment even we breathe this polluted air and there are alot of factors which responsible for this pollution.
        According to sources of air pollution ,it refers to the various location ,activities ,or factors which are responsible for the releasing of pollutants in the atomsphere. On one side  haman sources(activities), this kind related to burningdifferent kinds of fuel. i:(Stationary sources)include manufacturing facilities and waste incinerator ,as well as furances and other types of  fuel _burning heating devices . ii:(Mobile sources) include motor vehicle ,air craft and the effect of sounds. iii: Military works. iv:Chemical ,dust and controlledburn practices in agriculture ,and forest management. On another side the environment also contibute in this pollution by its natural factors like. i: Smoke and carbonmonoxide from wildfires. ii:Volacanic activity ,which produce sulfur ,chlorine and ash particulates. iii: Dust from natural sources, usually large areas of land with little or no vegetion. The increase of air pollution leads to arise of heat tempratuer and Stratosheric Ozone depletion. also it leads to make 2.4 million people die each year from cause directly to air pollution. Also it effects on cystic fibrosis, a study from 1999 to 2000 by the Univesity of Washington showed that patients near and around particulate matter air pollution had an increased risk of pulmonary exacerbations and decrease in lung function. With the increase of spreading this disease as areaction of air pollution, chlidern infected by this disease. Also the birth rate become low. This pollution also emerge more in poor countries that lacks wareness and education.
       There are various air pollution control technologies and land use planning strategies available to reduce air pollution. The following items are commonly used as pollution control devices by industry or transportation devices. They can either destroy contaminants or remove them from an exhaust stream before it is emitted into the atmosphere. We should make control using of particulate ,scrubbers ,mercury ,dioxin and furan. Also the government has an effictive role to help in decrease this pollution by putting alot of rules that helps in this pollution ,and put harm punish to whom be dissient.
       At the end ,we notice the danger of this problem and we should cooperate together to face this problem. As this problem threaten our life on the earth and other kinds of creatures. Also we should think that our God give us nature to use it in the correct way ,not to harm its creatures and change its component. We should keep our health because it amarvelous bless ,that nothing can compensate us for it.    

     
    

Describe the causes and effects of air pollution (Prewriting) first draft

i: Introduction paragraph
        a. What is the meaning of pollution?
        b. What is the meaning of air pollution?
        c. How we find it in our life?

ii: Causes and effects paragraph
        a. What is the reasons of air pollution?
        b. How environment contribute in causing thispollution?
        c: How this pollution effect on us in our life?

iii: Solution paragraph
        a: How we can face this problem?
        b: What is the role of our government to face this problem?
        c: What is our role towards this pollution?

iv: Conclusion paragraph.

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I'm Sara in 4th year in Suez Canal University in Suez

Faculty of Education

English department

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